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　　很多学生经常感到困惑：小作文都是描述同一个图表，要么描述趋势，要么是描述占比，要么是对比变化......每个句子都写得似曾相识，也觉得一直在重复句型，考官给分也不会很高，这种情况应该怎么办？
　　今天给大家讲讲该怎样利用句型的变化，让文章焕然一新！
　　我们以剑11《TEST1TASK1》中的这篇谈到工业、农业、家庭用水比例的文章为例。别慌！虽然有6个国家，3种类型的用水，但不难发现，这6国可以分为两类。
　　Developed areas（NORTH AMERICA，EUROPE）一类，特点是工业用水占约一半；其次是农业用水，而家庭用水最少。
　　第二类是Developing areas（SOUTH AMERICA，AFRICA，CENTRAL ASIA和SOUTHEAST ASIA），以农业用水为主导。
　　将所获得的数据信息分别归类之后，再描述就不那么难了。接下来，小编将以描述North America和Europe这两类国家的用水比例为例，为大家示范句型变化。
　　1 总结共性：两个地方用水比例相似
　　North America and Europe showed similarities in water used for the three purposes.
　　或The percentage of water used for three purposes were similar in developed areas(North America and Europe).
　　2 最大占比——工业用水，约一半
　　Industrial use played the dominant role in both countries,accounting for around half of the pie charts.
　　或Around half of the water consumed in both areas were for industrial purpose.
　　3 家庭用水占比最少
　　In contrast, the least part was occupied by domestic use,at around 15% in both countries.
　　或In comparison,only approximately 15% of the water consumed in these two areas was at home,which was the least part.

　　4 农业用水的差异——美国比例更高
　　39% of water used in North America was?for industrial purpose, and this proportion was slightly lower?for Europe,at 32%.
　　或Whereas, a higher percentage was seen?in agricultural use in America,at 39%,in contrast to?the proportion of 32% in Europe.
　　大家通过观察上面完全不同的8个句子发现了什么吗？除了动词变化，更重要的是，每个句子都有不同的主语。很多学生这篇文章都会不断地重复The percentage of ... was ... in America.