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审题&构思:
题干中关键词:most important - 属于词的题目,建议采用不同意写法。对于来说,另外两种能力更重要。
1.决策能力很重要;
们需要面对不断变化的环境,作出正确的决策,这有利于他们管理国家,or 经营公司。
例子细节:思考方式:什么,面对什么环境,作出了什么决策。起到积极的还是负面的作用。
例如美国经济大萧条时间,罗斯福针对由股票市场所带来的金融危机以及越来越高的失业率,作出了一个决策,推出了新政。出资大量的建设基础设施,提升对于基础劳动力的就业率。从而稳定国家动荡的局势,促进就业率提升。
2.接受意见的能力,
每个人都可能犯错,这在身上也很常见,虚心接受下属建议甚至是批评的能力也很重要;
例子细节:什么领导,作出了什么样的判断,是错误的,下属给出了什么建议,怎么接受了。举反例也是可以的。
二战的时候,日本偷袭珍珠港,当时其实很多下属是不同意的。因为一旦偷袭珍珠港,美国必然参战。结果是美国的加入,导致了日本广岛长崎两座城市,被原子弹袭击,导致了日本的快速战败。整个联盟的宣布战败。如果当时日本选择听从建议,历史可能会被改写。
结论:需要接受意见的能力。
魔君限时版本范文如下:
A successful leader or politician can be labelled by a number of excellent merits or capabilities. However, whether effective communication technique is superior to others is under my deep doubt. From my perspective, though the strong communication technique can help a leader or politician stand out during a public speech, I still believe there are two other more indispensable capacities. For one thing, the ability of making right and objective decisions is more essential than any other merit or virtue. To be specific, it is those political leaders and entrepreneurs’ responsibility to discern opportunities and make instantaneous and correct decisions as well as avoid various underlying threats or failures. A noticeable example happening during the Great Depression in the States can be quoted to prove what I believe. The famous and renowned American president,
Franklin De Roosevelt, was entangled in a huge crisis engendered by economic stagnation and the constantly increasing unemployment rate as well as the imminent eruption of social disorders. To drive the country back to its original prosperous trajectory, he made a bold decision to launch New Deal, which would compromise the profits of many consortiums. However, not only did his insistence in funding the construction of infrastructure facilities help resolve the emergent employment issue of those basic labor force but also it prompted the improvement of common citizens’ purchase power to revitalize the country’s economy. Apparently, the feat and success of President Roosevelt can prove how crucial the ability of making right decisions, especially when some crisis happen, is for politicians or leaders. For another thing, the ability of accepting suggestions and even criticism is roughly as important as the ability of making right decisions. As is known to all, nobody is perfect and the chance of downplaying some potential crisis is always existential. In this situation, owning the trait or capability of being humble to accept others’ suggestions becomes obtrusively significant. Another historical example was about the decision of attacking Pearl Harbor. At nearly the end of Second World War, the leader of Japan made a huge mistake by ordering its air force to clandestinely bomb Pearl Harbor to drag America into the war. Ultimately, Japan was soon revenged by the dropping of two atomic bombs and had to declare its surrender. Supposing that if the leader of Japan could adopt the advice from his underlings and didn’t launch the attack, the whole picture would possibly be rewritten. Apparently, it was the Japanese politicians’ obstinacy to reject others’ advice that led to its failure. In a word, from historic lessons, it is easy to draw the conclusion that the ability of making a quick and right decisions and the capacity of accepting others’ opinions are more important than others, including strong communication techniques. (458 words Written by