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  今天小编给大家带来了关于雅思考试的知识点分享,希望对大家的学习有所帮助,预祝大家考试顺利通过,生活愉快,身体健康。生活是一场漫长的旅行,不要浪费时间,去等待那些不愿与你携手同行的人。
  In many countries, the amount of rubbish is rapidly increasing. Why doe it happen? What can we do to solve this problem?
  Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
  Why do you think this is happening?
  What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
  审题:当题中有more and more,可在文中提及与过去的对比;当问措施,通常围绕立法、征税、罚款、投入经费、提供设施;当问到垃圾,属于环境话题,通常涉及污染、回收;此外,可对关键名词rubbish进行拆分,从而产生观点展开讨论。就考题而言,有“increasingly”,也可适当用“more...than...the past”之类的字样改写并回应。
  范文分段分析(划线为建议积累的话题相关表达):以下范文的段落结构可能会让大家觉得不熟悉、难以上手,没关系,这种2-part类的题目相对好写,只需开头结尾改述背景并预告/总结全文,每个主体段各回应一个问题/写作任务即可。建议大家着重学习范文中的观点和话题相关词汇。
  I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the PACkaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.
  学习点:开头段改述题目&引出观点。将“垃圾增多”具体到“家庭垃圾”,并进一步落到“包装”。
  The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket, and then at home.
  学习点:回应“为什么”。首句承接开头段提出的包装问题,使段落之间的衔接很紧密,具体的语言表达很扣题“we consume so much more ...than families in the past”扣题中的 Nowadays...more and more。第二句是个长句,进一步解释为什么包装增多。“图方便”可以是很多问题的原因,雅思写作小白可以记下来,用于“原因类”写作任务的构思。
  However, I think the amount of waste produced is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up vaulable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.
  学习点:继续回应“为什么”,“is also a result of”是很好的连接和表达方式。第二句和第三句解释为什么会出现使用一次性物品的趋势。“缺乏观念”也是很多问题的原因。
  I think,therefore,that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about enviromental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining househoulds and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.
  学习点:回应第二个写作任务“怎么办”。一是提高公众意识,这个idea承接了上一段的“forget”(认识不足)。二是鼓励环保行为,比如征包装税,提供回收设施,对不进行垃圾回收的家庭和商店进行罚款。这一段有一些同类问题的“万用表达”,比如:提高认识 raise the awareness,采取行动 take action,提供设施 provide services,征税 put tax on等。这一段还值得注意的是观点拓展方式,即分人群 children/adults和列举主体 household/shops。
  With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.

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