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　　雅思备考，大家准备的怎么样了呢？雅思11月16日真题大作文16句框架，高分范文-教育类agree类，下面让我们一起来看一看吧。
　　Family has a great influence on children’s development. However, outside factorsplay a bigger part in their life. To what extent do you agree or disagree (agree类,2019/11/16)
　　大作文四大基本类中agree类，关键：
　　1. 开头段表明立场，注意这里有一个比较“bigger part”，说明“家庭”和“外部因素”都得涉及
　　2.我在16句范文中列出每一步的用途，中间两个body段思维脑图如下：
　　3. 中间段落idea的拓展有两种方法:explain和example，其中explain包括三种：原因（问自己why？），结果（问自己so？），对比（对比另一个选择或/问自己如果不if not？）
　　4.划线部分为可借鉴“词伙”
　　 It is believed that external factors influence children’s development in a more significant way than parents. However, I would argue otherwise. Admittedly, social environment contributes to children’sdevelopment. When children receive education in school, teachers have a great effect on their thoughts and behaviors. For instance, a child maygrow interested in a certain subject such as drawing because of the instructions and guidance from teachers in class. Children may also be affected by what peers do. It is easy for children to develop similar interests or hobbies when they often hang out with friends in school. However, social influenceon a child's growth is limited when compared tofamilial influence.
Families have the most profound imPACt on nurturing a child, determining the ways in which they develop psychologically and socially. For starters, the socio-economic status of a family determines the quality of the opportunity a child gets. For instance, well-off familiescan offer better learning resources to help their children reach their full potential while children from poorer families have a higher incidence of dropout. For another, children’s formative years is mostly spent with parents. When families invest time, energy and love in children’s development through activities such as playing with them and reading to them, they often end up as individuals who have bettersocial skills and able to bond with other people as adults. In conclusion, children’s wellbeing is defined more by familial influence than by outside factors such as teachers and peers. Given this, parents would be well-advised to take on a critical role in bringing up their kids.