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总算懂了有关父母在教育中角色的雅思写作 雅思备考
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  今天小编为大家带来雅思写作—父母在教育中的角色,希望对大家有所帮助,接下来跟小编一起来看看吧。
  题目:In some countries,the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?
  【范文赏析】
  【首段】 背景介绍 写作目的
  Parents are the initial teachers of their children, thereby, their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. The imPACts that parents impose on their kids might differ greatly due to various reasons. This essay aims to explore where the differences lie in and how parental roles will change in the future.
  记忆点:thereby
  speeches and behaviors
  To a larger extent
  Exert a ... influence on
  Impacts ... impose
  Where the differences lie in
  【二段】父母对于孩子影响差异的原因展开
  Due to the gender differences,parental roles vary greatly in a child’s growth. Males tend to be more rational and tenacious, while females tend to be more tender and sensible, in this sense, a child can benefit differently from the parent. As a father, I always try my utmost to set a fine learning example for my child, what my kid can acquire from me is to be big at heart, cherish great ambition and rely on honest hard work to strike for those cherish-but-faiLED dreams. By contrast, seen from the role my wife plays, it is her unshakable obligation to guide our child to unite peers, respect the old, make a clear distinction between right and wrong. In addition,the distinct workload and pressure might account for the difference. Fathers, in most cases, have to stand out in career, hence, they usually allocate less to educating children, by contrast, mothers generally give priority to their families, thus, they will spend more time accompanying their children.
  记忆点:Tenacious and rational
  Tender and sensible
  In this sense
  Try my utmost
  Acquire from
  Unshakable obligation
  Unite the peers, respect the old
  Make a clear distinction between
  Stand out in career
  Allocate less or more (time) to doing sth. Spend less or more time doing sth
  结构
  Due to ... , in this sense, ... . By contrast, ... . In addition, ... . Thus... .
  【三段】父母对于孩子不同影响的未来展望
  Virtually,it is no easy task to simply predict the changes of the parental roles in the future,for different families might have manifold conditions. One possible change might be that more professional mothers will appear when their families have accumulated enough family wealth. More precisely, more females are willing to return to families and wholeheartedly take care of their children. Another predictable development I can figure out is that parents will make joint efforts in educating and guiding their children no matter how busy they are because numerous parents might take fostering excellent children as their source of happiness and spiritual contentment.
  记忆点:It’s no easy task to
  Different ... have manifold conditions
  Accumulate family wealth
  Another ... I can figure out is that
  Spiritual contentment
  【尾段】总结立场
  In closing,parenting will always have many indispensable roles to play in shaping children’s character, establishing their life outlook and influencing their destinies. My firm stand is that all parents will take efforts and take time to influence their children positively. After all, blood is thicker than water.

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