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　　7.27雅思写作真题思路解析我们先来看一下这一次小编带来的写作范文解析~
　　07-27 混合类 – 教育话题
　　Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up？
　　题目大意：
　　有些父母满足孩子的一切要求。这对孩子好吗？孩子长大后会有什么后果？
　　思路：
　　题目有两个问题，需要明确一一回应，即2个主体段，一段回应对孩子是否有好处；第二段回应对长大后的影响。
　　对于一个问题，建议能用批判性思维，对这个抽象的’good’，从不同的角度予以分析后再给出定论。如可以从物质满足的角度，以及孩子全面成长的角度，分别讨论后，得出是好是坏。
　　对于第二个问题，就可以在一、个问题得出的结论，予以展开。
　　关键词：
　　Good：是一个含糊抽象的词，可以从不同角度解读，再给出的定论。
　　consequences for these children when they grow up：要紧扣对孩子未来的影响，
　　提纲梳理如下：
　　范文
　　It is true that some parents tend to meet all requirements of their children. While people take different attitudes towards the influences on children, I would say whether it is a bless or not is a complicated problem that depends on how we define the meaning of ‘good’, and I am also not optimistic to its profound influence on the younger generation.
　　On the materialistic level,this permissive rearing style is certainly understandable –children who have all their requirements met and are allowed to do whatever they like can fully enjoy the warmth from parents and are more likely to cultivate a stronger self-esteem. Nevertheless, from a more comprehensive perspective, the materialistic satisfaction mentioned above can be considered from an opposite angle: the overindulgence will inevitably lead to many character flaws, say, the lack of self-discipline, the incapability of behavior control, and over reliance on parents, all of which will exert detrimental effects on their later life.
　　One problem that should attribute to the indulgent parenting is that many of such children are prone to juvenile delinquency. Without self-control of their greed and behaviors, which should have been cultivated at an early age, I doubt these children will obey any regulations or laws when grown up. As well as committing crimes, another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is the ineptitude, a consequence of their lack of independence since childhood. Such a defect will become the major obstacle in their future careers, from job hunting to problem solving, not to mention the numerous challenges in a comPETitive adult world.
　　In conclusion, the relentless responsiveness from parents is detrimental to the younger generation both in their formation of character in childhood and will cast a shadow in their later life.
　　相关词汇：
　　Optimistic 乐观的
　　Permissive 纵容的
　　Self-esteem自信
　　Overindulgence 溺爱
　　Reliance 依赖
　　Indulgent 溺爱的
　　Parenting 家教
　　juvenile delinquency 少年犯罪
　　ineptitude 无能
　　Responsiveness回应
　　8月1日场口语高频话题
　　1.去过的公园
　　Describe a park or garden you visited and liked.
　　2.理想的房子
　　Describe an ideal home (house or apartment) that you would like to live in.
　　3.实用的技能
　　Describe a practical skill you know.
　　4.广告
　　Describe an advertisement that left you a deep impression
　　5.喜欢的歌手或乐队
　　Describe a singer or band that you like
　　6.外语说得好的人
　　Describe a person who speak foreign language well
　　7.曾经不喜欢的科目
　　Describe a subject you didn't like before but have interest in now.
　　8.给别人的建议
　　Describe a time you gave advice to others.