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　　第一部分记叙文题型作文
　　写作步骤
　　要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，如：2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：
　　第一段、总结描述
　　交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：
　　主题句
　　第二段、具体描述
　　具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
　　起因 经过 结果
　　第三段、对事件的分析
　　分析句1 分析句2 分析3
　　第二部分、记叙文题型作文diy写作范文练习
　　[实战演练]
　　directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill.
　　1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况;
　　2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;
　　3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
　　[diy写作模板：架构阶段]
　　第一段：
　　开篇句：about _____ o'clock one evening in _______, _____.
　　扩展句：________. (展开描述一下事件)
　　第二段：
　　主题句：without hesitation, _____. it wasn't long before _____.
　　扩展句：1、one ______.
　　2、another _______.
　　3、our teacher _______.
　　第三段：
　　结尾句：is _______? who can tell ? but ______.
　　扩展句：1、when ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
　　2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
　　3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
　　[写作模板：填充阶段]
　　第一段：
　　开篇句：about nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
　　扩展句：his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5℃. (展开描述一下事件)
　　第二段：
　　主题句：without hesitation, i diaLED "120". it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived.
　　扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him.
　　2、another supported him in the ambulance.
　　3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
　　第三段：
　　结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we did't retreat.
　　扩展句：1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
　　2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
　　3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
　　第三部分、范文
　　about nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5℃.
　　without hesitation, i dialed "120". it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived. one roommate brought a blanket for him. another supported him in the ambulance. our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
　　is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we did't retreat. when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
　　常见的使用形式如下：
　　One of the greatest early writers said ...
　　"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
　　"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
　　"......". How often we hear such words like there.
　　Useful quotations
　　逆境
　　by Robert Collier
　　In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time.
　　努力与成功
　　by Ann Landers
　　Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people don't recognize them.
　　坚持
　　by Ralph Waldo Emerson
　　No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.
　　Confucius 孔子
　　Our greatest glory is not in never falling...
　　but in rising every time we fall.
　　坚持
　　Mother Teresa
　　To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.
　　Henry Ford
　　Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.
　　Winston Churchill
　　Never, never, never, never give up.
　　Albert Einstein
　　In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.
　　努力与成功
　　by Crassus
　　Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.
　　Thomas Edison
　　There is no substitute for hard work.
　　Leo Tolstoi
　　The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.
　　Thomas Jefferson
　　I'm a great believer in luck,
　　and I find the harder I work...
　　the more I have of it.
　　Robert Collier
　　Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.
　　Ray A. Croc
　　Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you get.
　　实际经验与间接经验
　　You'll learn more about a road by traveling it...
　　than by consulting all the maps in the world.
　　动机与结果
　　Vince Lombardi
　　Winning isn't everything...
　　but wanting to win is.
　　John F. Kennedy
　　We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are easy, but because they are hard.
　　Thucydides
　　The strong do what they will.
　　The weak do what they must.

　　为人态度：
　　John Wooden
　　Talent is God given--Be Humble.
　　Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.
　　Conceit is self given --Be Careful.
　　行动：
　　Theodore Roosevelt
　　Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.
　　Publilius Syrus Maxim
　　No one knows what he can do till he tries.
　　Terence
　　There is nothing so easy but that it becomes difficult when you do it reluctantly.
　　Thomas Fuller
　　A wise man turns chance into good fortune.
　　William Hazlitt
　　Prosperity is a great teacher;
　　adversity is a greater.
　　William Penn
　　No pains, no palm;
　　no thorns, no throne;
　　no gall , no glory;
　　no cross, no crown.
　　Will Rogers
　　Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over... if you just sit there.
　　Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.
　　Knock rather on opportunity's door if you ardently wish to enter
　　成功与失败
　　Vince Lombardi
　　It's not whether you get knocked down.
　　...It's whether you get up again.
　　Winston Churchill
　　An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;
　　a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.
　　热情(年轻/年老)
　　Ralph Waldo Emerson
　　Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
　　信心
　　James Allen
　　The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.
　　Samuel Johnson
　　Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.
　　Aughey
　　Lost time is never found again.
　　Voltaire
　　No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.
　　Napoleon
　　Victory belongs to the most persevering.
　　细心
　　Euipides
　　Leave no stone unturned.
　　计划与工作
　　Norman Vincent Peale
　　Plan your work for today and every day;
　　then work your plan.
　　Henry Ford
　　Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
　　Thomas Edison
　　I start where the last man left off.